Kia ora!
Today I'm showing you how much of a carrot I can eat in just one minute!
It was really hard to eat a lot in that time but I think I did okay.
It is actually a lot harder to eat a carrot fast than you may have thought.
How fast can you eat a carrot?
Do you like carrots?
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Hello Amelia, it's me Parwin! I see you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey, the challenge is on!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your title page because it was very bright and the orange background really made it pop out from everything else. I also like the drawing of the carrot too and its great that you explained how it felt when you were eating the carrot.
This reminds me of when I did this but it was easier for me as I usually eat carrots a lot so I found a bit easier but it was harder to eat since it was very solid and crunchy. Your favorite vegetable's are some of my favorite too, I like carrots, peas, corn, bro coli, tomato's, potato, cucumber, lettuce and I could go on but that would take too long!
I think that to improve, you could maybe add some more information about why you are doing this because I know why you are doing it because I am also doing it but if I were someone else then I wouldn't know why.
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Hi Parwin!
DeleteThanks for commenting again.
You are gonna win the learning journey if you keep this up!
In fact I think you already have.
Like I said, please add a question to your comment so I can reply to it.
Apart from that, good comment.
Bye now!
Thanks again for commenting.
-Amelia 😉