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Wednesday, April 15, 2020

Animal Jam School? Sounds Cool To Me!


Konnichiwa!
I am super excited to show you my writing.
Yeah, writing, BORING.
Read your mind, did I?
But, no it is definitely not boring, its entertaining, so you're gonna have to stay.
Its about a game, and a school, mixed together with some creativity!



The writing didn't take too long I guess, but I think its pretty detailed and decent.
I was going to do animating school or something, but would that really give me enough to write about? (Rhetorical)

Do you know what animal jam is?
If you don't, right now, search up 'animaljam.com/welcome'.
What could I improve on?
Your feedback is the best water for my growing roots and leaves.

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Cya later, Jammers.

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8 comments:

  1. Sharon SpraggApril 16, 2020 at 9:19 AM

    Kia ora Amelia,

    Thanks for sharing your writing. I found it interesting to hear about a school that is based in a game. I know you have loved Animal Jam for a long time. I must admit that for a little while I thought that perhaps your teachers were actually giving you Animal Jam for your learning and I was surprised. But then I realised that this wasn't the case but that you would love that to happen. Imagine!

    I wondered if you could use paragraphs in your writing to help with flow. Remember a paragraph starts a different idea. That would help to structure your writing a bit more and it would show how you are a level 3 writer.

    Keep up the great writing and blogging, enjoy Animal Jam!
    :) Mrs Spragg

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    1. AnonymousApril 20, 2020 at 12:29 PM

      Hi Mrs Spragg! (Can I still call you that?)

      Thanks for commenting.

      I should of done paragraphs, but I wasn't too sure where to put them.

      Wow, that would be surprising thinking that someone is learning about animal jam at school!

      Thanks again for commenting.

      -Amelia

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  2. AnonymousApril 17, 2020 at 8:56 AM

    Hi Amelia I am Olivia B
    I love your title how you wrote about animal jam school and that you shared it on your blog that was cool but I think you could work on making it longer to me I found it quite short but I loved it and I love animal and seeing you on there
    Did you make that gif?
    Kind regards Olivia

    See you on animal jam again soon!

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    1. AnonymousApril 20, 2020 at 12:33 PM

      Hi Olivia!

      Thanks for commenting.

      The reason it looks short is probably because I didn't know where to put paragraphs, so I just didn't put paragraphs.

      I didn't make the gif, but that would be cool if I did.
      I just need to learn how...

      Thanks again for commenting Olivia.
      I hope to see you on Animal Jam later on!

      -Amelia

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  3. AnonymousApril 17, 2020 at 1:37 PM

    Kia Ora Amelia!
    Its Me Maddie!

    WOW!
    I have noticed that with all of your blogs you always end with a cute little fox and start with Konnichiwa! I find that very interesting and I really like the idea of it! Good thinking!

    I love! How you have added a gif into it and remembered to do the source good to see that your thinking six :) But I think that instead of pasting the entire link maybe you could link it to a piece of writing for an exsample write link then link to that piece of text to do this you can use ctrl k.

    I think that this is such a good idea to do writing on and I hope your enjoying animal jam :).
    Stay safe and stay home!
    See you on our next google meet call!
    -Maddie :D

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    1. AnonymousApril 20, 2020 at 12:37 PM

      Hi Maddie!

      Thanks for commenting.

      I guess I could do that, it wouldn't make that much of a difference but I'll give it a try.

      The reason I always start with Konnichiwa and end with a little fox emoji is because I had the idea of it once, then I just kept on doing it.

      Thanks again for commenting Maddie!

      -Amelia

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  4. Allan RobertsonApril 20, 2020 at 10:52 AM

    Kia ora Amelia

    i hope you know me well enough to know that I would never think that writing is boring. I also never think that your writing is boring. In fact I always find your writing to be the exact opposite of boring and this piece is proof positive of this assertion.

    I am glad that you enjoy Animal Jam. with so many games and apps available I would be interested to know why you have developed such a liking for Animal Jam.

    Imagine having teachers that are 'kind of strict' - I wonder what that would be like.

    Kind regards
    Mr R

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    1. AnonymousApril 20, 2020 at 12:40 PM

      Hi Mr Robertson!

      Thanks for commenting.

      I added that part to hook people reading my blog so they wouldn't just leave at first glance.

      Honestly, I thought I knew you well enough to know you never use lowercase I when it's alone.

      Thanks again for commenting!

      -Amelia

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