Kia ora!
I haven't been on for a while since my chromebook broke.
So I haven't really been able to do the learning journey.
But luckily my little sister Mikayla let me borrow her chromebook, so here we are.
I'm doing activity 6 of the spring learning journey.
I wish I could try celery and my google drawing will show you some reasons.
I mean if hamsters are able to eat vegetables, so can humans!
Hello Amelia, it's me Parwin! I see you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey, the challenge is on!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your google drawing because it had a picture of celery and a Hamster too! I love Hamsters! I also like how you have just sort of separated everything so that it's easy to read and understand. A fact that really surprised me was the water one but celery is like very moist because I have tried it and it is sort of flavorless but has a unique taste to it.
This reminded me of when I did this activity and when I tried Celery. When I did this activity, I picked Avocado because I heard it's pretty healthy and we had some lying around the house so I did try Avocado and honestly, it was pretty nice! The first time I tried Celery was at someone's house and after that, when we went shopping, I just bought some Celery for myself and my brothers thought something was wrong with me because they hate any type of vegetables and then there's me, who loves all vegetables.
I think to improve, you could explain a little bit more about maybe why you chose to do that activity or maybe why you want to try celery. You could also maybe add some more information like maybe about what the Spring Learning Journey is and stuff like that.
Why do you want to try Celery?
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin