Wednesday, May 15, 2019
The Floodlands Longwrite -Amelia
Hey bloggers! Today I'm sharing my longwrite with you. It shows that I know how to use a range of description like similes, metaphors, personification, and more. Hopefully this piece of writing will show you that I can write really well and am now good at using a bunch of different types of description. Just so you know the black writing is what I wrote and the blue is the storystarter that my teachers wrote. Ok, let's see what you think of it!
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