I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 8 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I'm Kaia from Kawakawa Primary school. I really liked your piece of writing it made me happy to see that you have also red the book named warrior cats and made it into another story. Have you thought about adding pictures to match your writing maybe?.
Hello Kaia, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School. I am glad to see another warriors fan and pictures is a great idea I didn't think of adding some pictures!
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Hello Amelia
ReplyDeleteI'm Kaia from Kawakawa Primary school. I really liked your piece of writing it made me happy to see that you have also red the book named warrior cats and made it into another story. Have you thought about adding pictures to match your writing maybe?.
Hello Kaia, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School. I am glad to see another warriors fan and pictures is a great idea I didn't think of adding some pictures!
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