I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 8 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey Amelia, What a cool poster you have created with some good ideas. I like that you have added that you want the author to feel happy! This reminds me of the video we watched the other week - Quality Blog Comments Top Tips! To improve this post I would make sure that I have the poster embed only once - I think you may have put it twice? How do you think this comment is? Does it meet all of the things you have said?
I think it was pretty cool that it showed up twice, but no I didn't mean to put that twice. It really matters that the author of the blog feels happy about the comments!
Hi Amelia, my name is Richard. My class is Hauraki in Waikowhai Primary School. Your blog was really nice and I liked that your showing others how to comment. Next time you should add some information about why you did this blog. when I just started commenting I didn't know what to do but there was a template to help me so I think your blog really connects to my learning. Why did you do this blog did your class do it as well. Come and check out my blog at http://wpsrichardm.blogspot.co.nz
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Something helpful - add more info or ask me a question. 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning?
Hey Amelia,
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool poster you have created with some good ideas. I like that you have added that you want the author to feel happy!
This reminds me of the video we watched the other week - Quality Blog Comments Top Tips!
To improve this post I would make sure that I have the poster embed only once - I think you may have put it twice?
How do you think this comment is? Does it meet all of the things you have said?
I think it was pretty cool that it showed up twice, but no I didn't mean to put that twice. It really matters that the author of the blog feels happy about the comments!
ReplyDeleteHi Amelia, my name is Richard. My class is Hauraki in Waikowhai Primary School. Your blog was really nice and I liked that your showing others how to comment. Next time you should add some information about why you did this blog. when I just started commenting I didn't know what to do but there was a template to help me so I think your blog really connects to my learning. Why did you do this blog did your class do it as well. Come and check out my blog at http://wpsrichardm.blogspot.co.nz
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