I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 8 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wow Amelia, your writing is really developing. I am very impressed with the descriptive language you are using. Great to see a few similes and some other iSpace. Are you enjoying this book? It sounds like Ivan might be lonely and a bit cold. I haven't read this book. Do you think I should?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Something helpful - add more info or ask me a question. 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning?
Wow Amelia, your writing is really developing. I am very impressed with the descriptive language you are using. Great to see a few similes and some other iSpace. Are you enjoying this book? It sounds like Ivan might be lonely and a bit cold. I haven't read this book. Do you think I should?
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Thanks Mrs Spragg. I am enjoying this book, well was its finished now. Yes you should read it, why not?
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