I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 8 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Amelia: Thank you for sharing this work on your blog. I would love to know more about 'There's a Boy in the Girl's Bathroom.' Did you like the book? Was it a funny or sad story?So many questions. Great use of apostrophes!
Hello Amelia, I'm Ruby from PCS, I am a year 6. I think this looks like a funny book? But I'm not sure because It doesn't really say what it is, maybe next time you could add a caption so the readers know what learning you have been working on. I think this is a really well drawn drawing. Good Job :) Ruby
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Something helpful - add more info or ask me a question. 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning?
Amelia: Thank you for sharing this work on your blog. I would love to know more about 'There's a Boy in the Girl's Bathroom.' Did you like the book? Was it a funny or sad story?So many questions. Great use of apostrophes!
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.
I think that this post is very interesting about a boy in the girls bathroom and I think that the title is clever.
ReplyDeletethat is going to be embarassing well the truth is I am a girl but still its like a girl going into a boys bathroom
ReplyDeleteTrue.
ReplyDeleteThe book was a really good book. I don't know what to say about it.
ReplyDeleteHello Amelia,
ReplyDeleteI'm Ruby from PCS, I am a year 6.
I think this looks like a funny book? But I'm not sure because It doesn't really say what it is, maybe next time you could add a caption so the readers know what learning you have been working on.
I think this is a really well drawn drawing.
Good Job :)
Ruby