Konnichiwa!
A few days ago, I wrote a story about one of my soft toys going on an adventure.
A few days ago, I wrote a story about one of my soft toys going on an adventure.
It was fun to write, but I wonder if it's fun to read.
How about you read it and find out!
How about you read it and find out!
This took a while to do but Mr Robertson (aka the principal) helped me fix up a few things.
Whats your favourite paragraph?
What can I do to improve?
What can I do to improve?
Don't judge me if its kinda sad, okay!
Cya later!
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